*Good use of past and present tense.*Used opinions and justified them.-Use the future tense; proximo fin de semana va a ver los DVD's con mi padre
this text used present tense,past tense,opinions,it also justified opoions,used linking words,talked about other people and used A* phrases. But to get a 6/7 future tense should have been used.
Good use of opinoins and justifying opinions. There were many A* phrases. Try to use future tenses your next piece of writing
You have acheived all of the assessment criteria except including future tense. Your wish is to include future tense for example: "Voy a compar regalos."
Good use of the present and past tense and also you have used a range of opinions and justified them!It is also very good because you have spoke about other people and you have included some a* phrases!To get a higher level you will need to include some future tense!